- first my TOEFL score
- determiner (a, the, my, three) + adjective + noun
If you are struggling with stuff like this, please attend Yoshi-sensei's 5 week grammar class. You won't regret it.
Please use English well!
The global average TOEFL speaking score is 19. The Japan average score is 15. My students' average top TOEFL speaking score is 23. Why? Because they don't use templates! If you have a clear voice and practice regularly, you should get 23 consistently too.